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Fourth Grade Persuasive and Expository Essay Rubric


 
Focus Elaboration Organization Integration
6 • I have a great introduction that explains my topic.
• I kept my focus.
• The paper is logical.
• I have a great closing, although it may be a restatement of points from the introduction.
• All my ideas have specific supporting details.
• I developed my paper with many examples, reasons, or explanations.
• I used interesting and clear words to support my topic.
• I ordered my ideas logically.
• I used paragraphs appropriately.
• My paper is connected between the paragraphs and flows within the paragraphs.
• I used a variety of sentences.
• I used a variety of appropriate transitions
• I have a fully developed paper for my grade level.
• I have a clear and developed focus.
• I have balanced, specific details.
• My sentences and paragraphs fit smoothly together

5

• I introduced my topic

.• I keep my focus.
• The paper is logical.
• I have a closing.

• Most of my ideas have specific supporting details.
• I develop my paper with some examples, reasons, or explanations.
• I used interesting and clear words that support my topic.
• I put my ideas in logical order.
• Most of my paragraphs are correct.
• Most of my paper is connected between the paragraphs and flows within the paragraphs.
• Some of my sentences are varied.
• I used appropriate transitions.
• My paper is developed for my grade level.
• I have developed all writing features, but some parts of my paper are better developed than others.
4 • I may begin my writing without a clear introduction.
• If I introduced the paper with a preview, I wrote only about my previewed points.
• I gave some support to maintain the subject.
• Some of my paper is focused and logical.
• I may have a closing.
• Some of my ideas have specific supporting details.
• I developed my paper with some general examples, reasons, or explanations.
• I put my ideas in logical order.
• Many of my paragraphs are correct.
• Some of my paper is connected between the paragraphs and flows within the paragraphs.
• Some ideas do not fit my paper.
• I used some simple transitions.
• My paper is developed for my grade level.
• My paper is simple, clear, and presents the essentials.
3 • I may begin my paper with no introduction.
• My subject or position may depend on my readers’ knowing the prompt.
• I may not have stayed on topic with my subject or position.
• I may have more than one position without tying them together.
• I may not have written enough.
• Few of my ideas have specific supporting details.
• My details may look like a list.
• I may not have written enough to support my topic.
• I tried to explain my topic, but it was unclear.
• Few of my ideas were in paragraphs, and they may not have been in order.
• Many ideas do not fit my paper.
• I may not have written enough.
• I have inappropriate transitions.
• My paper is partially developed for my grade level.
• I have included all writing features, but at least one of these features is not complete.
• I may not have written enough.
2 • My subject is unclear.
• I wrote about different subjects, or I changed my focus.
• I may not have written enough.
• I may not have written a persuasive or expository paper.
• I may have used unclear or unrelated supporting details.
• My details may be a list of ideas that do not go together.
• I have not written enough to show support.
• I tried to explain my subject, but it did not make sense.
• My paper has few correct paragraphs.
• My paper has few transitions that make sense.
• I may not have written enough.
• My paper is not developed for my grade level.
• I tried to use the features of writing in my paper but my readers may be confused.
• My paper is not persuasive or expository.
• I may not have written enough.
1 • My writing is confusing.
• I did not write about the topic.
• I have not written enough.
• I did not write enough to support my topic.
• My writing is confusing.
• My writing is confusing.
• I did not write enough.
• I did not write enough.
  C

Conventions

2 • I have mastered sentence construction.
• My paper may have a few invented spellings of uncommon words.
• Subjects and their verbs agree correctly.
• My paper has demonstrated mastery of basic punctuation and capitalization.
1 • The number of errors in my paper interferes with my readers’ understanding.
       

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